Friday, October 30, 2009

Due Tuesday, Nov. 3: 7th Grade Assignment

Copy and paste the following passage and correct all of the errors. The errors may include spelling, usage, capitalization, and grammar. After you are done editing and proofreading, post the correct version of this passage onto this post!


Early this months, I closed my closet door to hide the mess. then I began to keep my close in a orderly fashion. The cheif reason was that my Mother said she was going to trade my close for something she wanted. I new I could count on her to do it!


Wednesday, Nov. 4: Students really struggled to correctly edit this passage. I posted one correct passage which you can check out, but you can just look below and see the way it SHOULD be written.

Early this month, I closed my closet door to hide the mess. Then, I began to keep my clothes in an orderly fashion. The chief reason was that my mother said she was going to trade my clothes for something she wanted. I knew I could count on her to do it!

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Early this month, I closed my closet door to hide the mess. Then, I began to keep my clothes in an orderly fashion. The chief reason was that my mother said she was going to trade my clothes for something she wanted. I knew I could count on her to do it!

Andrew schilling